
Hello ‘Weavers’, this is the 10th W3 prompt hosted by David (see link below), the poem prompt this week is by Punam Sharma, a Haiku entitled ‘Slavery’ which is very powerful, the guideline is to write a poem about the moon from the sun’s perspective or vice versa, in any form – I have chosen the moon. My poem below is ‘The Moon’s Lament’, thanks for reading:

Lovely rhyme and rhythm!
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Thanks 🙂
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Oh, wow this is beautiful..👏👏👏
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You are very kind to say so thanks
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The longing and lament so palpable! Beautifully expressed.
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Thank you 🙂
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You are welcome. 🙂
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I really like this flow and rhythm!! And as others have said – the lament is raw and real!
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Thanks so much 🙂
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awww…. this is sad, Ange 😦
❤
David
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Yes – that’s life 😦
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I like those last two lines
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Thanks 🙂
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hi, Ange ❤
I just wanna let you know that this week's W3 prompt, hosted by Steven S. Wallace, is now live:
Have a wonderful day,
David
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Thanks David I will certainly look at this today ♥️
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