
This weeks prompt is to write a Japanese Kouta 小唄 (short song) that has several variations, though always short. The theme should reflect ordinary life and often uses colloquialisms and onomatopoeia, most popular are love songs. The elements of Kouta are: 4 lines. (occasionally 5); a stand alone poem but can be accompanied by other Koutas with the same theme; variable syllables, the most common patterns are 7-5-7-5 or 7-7-7-5; secular, personal, themes of ordinary life and often includes onomatopoeia.
Here is mine, although not very seasonal 🙂


I can hear and see them bumbling among the blooms through your words 💞
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Thank you don’t you just love bees ❤
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Yes! Especially the fruit of their labors!
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Cute haiku!!! 🙂
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Thanks 🙂
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Cute poem and beautiful photo!
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Thanks 🙂
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You’re welcome.
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Oh this is a cute kouta, AJ. I love how your words flowed from beginning to end. 🐝
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Thanks so much 🙂
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So wonderful! A poem form meaning “short song,” for the bees to dance to! Lovely.
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Thanks Lisa ❤
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This is so cute and made me smile. 🙂
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Thanks so much Marje ❤
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Lovely, Ange ❤
~David
P.S. buzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Thanks 🙂
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Love it! Great poem. 🌞
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Thanks so much Gwen ❤️
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Cute kouta!
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