
Hi, i’s Tuesday and Tanka time 🙂 this week Colleen asks that we share the view outside our window by writing a poem in syllabic form. https://wordcraftpoetry.com/2023/03/28/tankatuesday-weekly-poetry-challenge-no-313-3-28-23/. It’s a bit drizzly here in Wales, and it was very misty this morning so this sets the scene for my tritina.
American poet, Marie Ponsot (1921-2019) invented the tritina, which she describes as the square root of the sestina. Instead of six repeated words, you choose three, which appear at the end of each line in the following sequence: 123, 312, 231; there is a final line, which acts as the envoi, featuring all three words in the order they appeared in the first stanza.
Thanks for looking 💕


Fabulous poem, Angela. Love your raindrops description. 💕
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thanks Grace 😊
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My pleasure 💕
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Sad and lovely 💦
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Thanks Paula, sometimes drizzle makes me feel a little sad – but not for long 😊
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Brilliantly done Angela! 👌👌👏👏😁😁
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Thanks so much Ken 💕
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Beautiful.🌧️
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Thanks so much Melissa 💞
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First time hearing of this form. Looks complicated. You gave a nice snapshot of your space here, AJ.
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Thanks Lisa it isn’t too complex once you get in the flow 😊
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You’re welcome.
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Pearls and raindrops… what an apt simile! I love the flow of this poem.
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Thanks for your kind words 💞
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Very cool form. Strong imagery that hinged nicely on the repeated word.
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Thanks for reading and your comments much appreciated 💜
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This is a real pearl of a poem! I prefer the tritina over the sestina any day!!
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Thanks Val 💞
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Beautiful poem.
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Thanks Sadje 💞
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My pleasure
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There is something magical about pearls – at least I think so coming from the sea –
an irritant, a grain of sand covered by the clam to make his body comfortable in his shell.
Then I think beauty can be found in the peary words of your verse.
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Aww Jules that is such a lovely thing to say thank you 🙏🤍
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What a fun form… the repetition of the pearls and raindrops really makes your words sing. Well done! 💛
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Thanks so much Colleen 💞
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You’re welcome, Angela.
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It’s ages since I’ve seen a tritina. Thank you! It’s a lovely seasonal one.
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Thanks so much Jane 💜
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xxx
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That’s beautiful, and I love the form!!!
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Thank you Luanne so glad you like it 💕
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You are welcome!
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Wonderfully done…looks difficult to create in this form but you did it so beautifully! 💞💞💞
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Thanks so much Dawn, I didn’t find it to hard once you’re into the swing of it 😊
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Very cool poem, Angela! With so much restriction, you did a great job of creating different scenes!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
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Thank you 💞
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Wonderful poem and great form. It will be good if some of our thoughts vanish, but they can be persistent.
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Thanks so much 💗
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The reverie of rain…(K)
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Thank you 💗
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Thanks so much 💕
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Thank you💕
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