
Hi, well it’s the first Friday in December – where has the year gone? The great photo prompt above for Rochelle’s Friday Fictioneers – https://rochellewisoff.com/2022/11/30/2-december-2022/ is from Roger Bultot. Here is my piece of flash in 100 words entitled ‘The Wait’, thanks for looking:)


Well done! Her anticipation and anxiety are so clear. I like how she could not hear the water but imagined it. A very visceral scene!
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Thanks 🙂
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He is not in one of those cars. He’s right behind you. The pleasantry of anticipation well-ended.
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Thanks Bill ❤
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Interesting depiction of waiting and impatience. I wonder if Phil is the man standing behind her, or if she’s hoping he was heading out of town so she could meet this beau!
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I’m hoping it’s Phil!!:)
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Perfect set up and follow through. That last line made me sigh with satisfaction. 💞
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The sense of waiting is palpable. It sounds like it was well worth the wait.
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🙂
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Anticipation then relief. Nicely done!
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🙏 thanks 💕
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Love the setting and the feel of this piece 💞💞💞 I certainly hope that’s Phil behind her based on her anticipation and reaction!
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Thanks – well I hope it’s him! 🙂
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her name is bridget? what an appropriate name for the story. 🙂
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Ha I didn’t even notice – must have been subliminal :()
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Love this! I was waiting in anticipation with her.
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Thanks 🙂
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I was beginning to feel so sorry for her, and then that happened! Delightful.
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Thanks Keith 🙂
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Dear Angela,
I love a happy ending. This one didn’t disappoint…and thankfully, neither did Phil.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks 🙏
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Oh the build up! I was worried he’d stood her up. Glad the story had a happy ending
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Thanks 💕
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Oh my…. I do love this!
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Thanks Dale 😍
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Ooh, so titillating! I could feel his fingers. I love the deliciousness of waiting.
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Thanks Lisa 🤩
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You’re welcome 🙂
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