Hi in the dVerse bar hosted by Laura Bloomsbury’s the theme is all about endings, she has challenged us to take the very last line from each of our most recent poems and re-write them into a poem https://dversepoets.com/2022/12/01/mtb-in-my-end-is-my-beginning/
– choose at least 12 poems (for this 12th month!)
– keep each line intact, unadulterated
– we may add preposition, conjunction or change of tense.
I found this so much fun – although it did make me reflect that a lot have gloomy themes! But the one created is a game of two halves, thanks for looking 🙂
Ha! Karaoke night. That was a splendid ending. You’ve put together a wonderful collage of lines.
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Thanks 🙂
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Such a wild mix of images! I was not expecting Karaoke night! 🙂
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Ha no that was a bit off-piste, I wasn’t sure how I could factor that in 🙂
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It was a fun attempt. 🙂
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a lovely composite of your lines in an almost seamless blend – thank you for joining in
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Thanks I really enjoyed it 🙂
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The first six lines make quite a poem on their own . But that’s not to say I didn’t greatly enjoy the ride that the next six lines gave me!
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Love how “dancing” to a curious child’s tune leads humorously to karaoke! 🙂
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I like the last ending line – it turned out fun.
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Thanks – bit of a poem of two halves 🙂
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I like the idea of dancing with the wave. This is layered like a dream. (K)
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Excellent!
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I love this ❤️
“just listen to the birds
they’re waiting for the Spring”
wonderful lines💕
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Thank you ❤
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How fun! Great job making that seamless 💞💞💞
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So much joy in that karaoke night
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🙂
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I love how you used ‘it’s karaoke night” as the last line! Totally unexpected yet fitting! 😊❣️
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Thanks 🙂
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