Hi, our challenge this week by Merril, is to write a piece of flash fiction or other prose of up to or exactly 144 words, including this given line:
“An early moon is just a piece of change in the softening sky. “
From the beautiful poem, “Spring Poem for the Sake of Breathing, Written After a Walk to Foster Island” by James Masao Mitsui (https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/141929/spring-poem-for-the-sake-of-breathing-written-after-a-walk-to-foster-island-)
Thanks for sopping by 😊
Beautifully done AJ
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Cheers Sadje 😊
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This was nice, Ange. Yes, it is nice to watch the night develop. Thanks for peeking in on me, I wanted it to be a little puzzle without an answer of what is happening to our hero.
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Thanks Jim – and by the way, you were very successful in achieving your goal 🙌
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Lovely, Ange. Sunset is one of my favorite times of day. Such a great time to stop and take in the world.
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Thanks Chris ❤️
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So beautiful! I love all the color in this. You are right, there is always beauty, and we just need to take the time to see it. 💙
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Thanks for your lovely comments 💕
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You’re welcome! 😊
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Such calmness to notice the change while still knowing that beauty will be there (even in darkness)
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Thanks Björn 💕
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Beautifully written reminder in this season of change 💞💞💞
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Thanks Dawn 💜
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