Hi this week at dVerse’s Poetics, we have Melissa as our host 🙌, and she invites us to write a poem to include the humble onion in some way or other. https://dversepoets.com/2023/08/01/poetics-peeled-away/
Exciting! 😃
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Hi this week at dVerse’s Poetics, we have Melissa as our host 🙌, and she invites us to write a poem to include the humble onion in some way or other. https://dversepoets.com/2023/08/01/poetics-peeled-away/
Exciting! 😃
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I love the sensuality of this. It’s like a mind meld. Am I a metaphor for the onion or is the onion a metaphor for me?🤯😉🥰
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I will leave it to your imagination Melissa 😅
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I published a poem about flowers and other things just now.🌹A bit risqué.😉❤️
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And scent is full of layers, just like this poem, Ange. Well done!
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Thanks Colleen for the lovely comments 😊
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You’re welcome, Ange.
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Beautiful take on the prompt, thank you for sharing!
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Thanks so much Miriam ♥️
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The onion lips cause the peeling of the recipient of the kiss! Wow. That is some superpower…
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😂 the breath may have something to do with it too 😘
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How sensual is this onion lips poem. Love it!!!!
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Thanks Grace – so powerful those onions 😄
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Aw, come on. Just one little kiss on the cheek or neck please!!
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😘 💋there you go Jim …..did it work😄
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Wonderful. LOVE this!💕
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Thanks Grace so glad you did 💜
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My pleasure 💕
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Very interesting take Angela!
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😅 Tanks Sadje
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You’re welcome AJ
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Ooohhh
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😅😂😉
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Oh, wow. This is So sensual! 🔥
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Thanks Merril 😄
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You’re welcome!
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Ravishing use of the onion metaphor!
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😄Thanks Dora 💞
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Your usе of thе onion as a mеtaphor for lovе and its ability to mark somеonе with its scеnt is dееply moving. I can fееl thе еmotions and passion in еach linе, and thе imagеry of unravеling layеrs adds a sеnsе of vulnеrability and intimacy. 👍👏👌😊
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Pankaj thank you for such lovely feedback, it is much appreciated ❤️
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Oh my! I so love the sensuality of this poem 😍😍😍 Kudos to you! ❤️
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Thanks so much for your lovely comments 💕
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Ooh, the sensual works beautifully here, AJ!
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Thanks, so glad you like it 💕
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